Faridoon Shahryar's Blog


Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Winking Sweat

As I walk
Through the jungle,
Scared, and yet,
Awestruck,
The eyes
Stay glued
To the
uneven road ahead.

I find solace
In the bird song,
Cautious of
The rustling leaves,
Anticipating eeriness.

There's dust on the leaves
Or is it a disease;
Thirsty faces
Pledging honesty;
Sweat, winks coquetishly,
Unseen blood, flows...

7 comments:

  1. Most beautiful Faridoon !! Just loved it :))

    ReplyDelete
  2. Thanks Saanj...glad u liked it...

    cheers

    ReplyDelete
  3. Very nice Faridoon.. Particularly liked "I Find solace in the bird song"..
    Very visual poetry!

    ReplyDelete
  4. I really love the first paragraph of the poem. Small and Nice poem! Thanks for sharing Faridoon! :)

    ReplyDelete
  5. thanks Paula and Anshula...glad u guys liked it

    cheers!!!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Hey Faridoon, I just saw your interview with Zayed Khan. I thought you did a great job grilling him about his past choices. I agree with you that the bollywood writers are not paid enough. However, I wanted to let you know that Bheja Fry was a remake of Le Dîner de Cons. Therefore, it wasn't a good example of good writing by a bollywood writer.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Thanks Polykarolly..glad u liked zayed's interview...

    cheers

    ReplyDelete